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Wednesday, March 21, 2012

Infinite's Reception/ Love Is All change

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I am changing Love is All around a bit.What do you think of this as a beginning. It's still a work in progress.

Well, I walk upon the river like it's easier than land. Solitude. Music blares out of Alex's (going to change name, not sure to what yet) headphones. It was going to be a long train ride from Clifton Heights to Mountain Top. She picks up her pen filled with green ink and smooths the paper's crease in her journal.

"He's a douchebag," her friend's voice rings through Alex's thoughts. The neon lights bring out the shocking hue of the blue walls. It reminds Alex of a rock star heaven with obnoxious walls, blaring music and alcohol that flows freely. Yet, despite the aura of the bar, the screen of the phone lights up and captures Alex's attention. Jess (going to change this name too... not sure to what yet). Jess, her heart flutters and sinks at the same time.

"What's wrong," her friend had asked after witnessing the sudden drop of the martini glass with half emptied cosmopolitan. Alex doesn't know what comes over her, she never lets her friends get involved in her affairs, but she hands over her phone to her friend: "look." Alex gulps down the rest of her cosmopolitan, Adele's depressing voice echoing in the background, and snaps her fingers: "waiter!waiter! Jack and coke please!"

In the pale yellow light that shines above Alex's table, muted by the neon and the mirrors in the room, her friend hands her back her phone. "Like I said, it still stands. He's a douchebag! He only said 'my bad' when he should be here! He's a sorry excuse for a human being!"

"He can go fuck himself!"Alex clenches her teeth and picks up her Jack and coke. "I'm so mad, I wish I could text," she thinks a bit - the alcohol was getting to her, "but, I won't." The phone continues to rest on the table...

More later...

3 comments:

  1. Ah, melodrama!!!! Angst!!!! Misshapen love!!!!

    Continue, my dear, continue.

    :-)

    Love and blessings,

    Dr. Ni

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  2. Congratulations on the recognition! :)

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  3. Thanks guys. ^_^

    Dr. Ni, it's been five years since I've written melodrama-- I forgot how fun it is!

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