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Monday, June 6, 2011

Battlefield of Love

Battlefield of Love
Jessica Marie
Follow, follow me, hurry right away
back to the tent, don't delay--
I know a Southern gent like me,
must say to such a pretty girl - please;
your porcelain skin, dark red hair tease,
brown freckles that never stain
on the battlefield of your temper slain--
your love of the Stars and Bars,
so hurry, hurry under the stars;
not so far away, twinkle of your eyes.
Why the delay, my pretty dear,
tell your daddy not to fear--
never worry, this war won't leave tears.
I will be waiting for you here,
so hurry, hurry right away;
you're in good hands my love, don't delay.

3 comments:

  1. I like the theme a lot. I think you should add a little more about the relationship between the speaker and the lady. Have they known each other long or have they just met? I think it has a lot of potential.

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  2. Thank you. I am going to write a follow up or a pre-quel to this, haha. It's such a long, complicated story. ;)

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